Friday, 31 May 2019

Cross Country

Cross country

The cross country   was really tiring but i’m happy that i did it  we had to run three laps and go up heaps of hills while we were running I came tenth in the cross country  I made it into the inter school cross country and all my other friends made it in to I came 16th in the inter school cross country.

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 July 2019 at 09:23

    Hi Ajia your writing was really good but maybe next time you could add a bit more writing. well done for coming 10th.

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  2. Anonymous22 July 2019 at 09:26

    Hi Ajia,
    Woah that is amazing! You look like you were running really fast and coming tenth is a hard thing to do. I get how tired you must have been after running three whole laps as well as going uphill. But maybe next say if it was close or if you were tenth by a mile/metre. ka mau te wehi Ajia!

    From, Maddie

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  3. Mauatua22 July 2019 at 10:34

    Kia ora Ajia, you did awesome at running! I can’t believe you came tenth and got into the interschools. It’s quite funny I ran the same race as you! You could also proofread your writing next time because you have missing full stops and capital letters. Kapai Ajia!

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  4. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 10:26

    Kia ora Maddie ! thank you for the positive comment. I did my best on doing the cross country but thank you for the positive comment you said to me.

    From Ajia

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